look i see you did your best to stretch this film to 14:13 to hit 1. the meme number and 2. epic long flash sequence length length, but
man that was just really bad pacing!! if it weren't for that i think this would have been a really well executed work! the epic homestuck flashes we love are usually composed of short atmosphere/setting establishment shots and RAPIDFIRE INFORMATION INFODUMPS!! and this was.... not that.
to illustrate this to myself, i re-watched this animation, skipping forward 5 seconds roughly every 1 second. the end result is... not so bad? the pacing is practically fixed.
i bet you could fit this into 1:43! maybe 3:14 if you stretched it. but 14:13 was too long and it makes me sad because otherwise, this would have been really good!